I've rewritten 300+ websites for startups from pre-seed to unicorn.

Here are my top learnings 👇

Share the benefit, not the product.

Users don't care what you sell, they care about how they get value:

• Start with an action verb
• Make a bold claim
• Talk directly to your persona

Hook the users so they NEED to read on.
Turn your feature sections into narratives.

• Dig at your audience's problem
• Twist the knife at why the problem is bad
• Share your feature's solution

Make your feature sections both memorable AND relatable.
Give users a sense of FOMO (Fear Of Missing Out).

When pitching your product, make users feel like everyone else already knows about it.

• "2,194 trials started"
• "25,000+ privacy community"
Show users how easy it is to get started by handling objections.

• "Join our Beta. It's free."
• "No credit card required"
• "Cancel anytime"

Give users no excuse to NOT click through.
Motivate users to take the next steps.

Be specific about the value users get by clicking forward:

• "Get started" → "Sign up now to automate Slack"
• "Join us" → "Start learning"

Reassure users they're on the right path.
Keep your visuals simple.

Bad: @Retool's demo is overwhelming with text and visuals

Good: @HelloSign instead uses blurred text so users only focus on the features that matter.
Bonus: Reply to the first tweet in this thread with your startup's website.

I'll reply back with a video teardown.
Thanks for reading!

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Thanks to everyone who sent their landing page so far!

I’ll be replying/DMing teardowns to everyone over the next week :)
Wow, I didn’t expect this many responses😮🤯🙏 That’s it for landing page teardowns!

I’ll do my best to reply/DM everyone who responded before now throughout this week :)
If you want copywriting inspiration, here are some of my favorites:
• https://t.co/WWtARXKLGT
• https://t.co/8rjKYrOYl0
• https://t.co/pXzeSyP9tU
• https://t.co/AFg2a9gAwV
• https://t.co/Re5uCbSih3

What are some other great examples?

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Margatha Natarajar murthi - Uthirakosamangai temple near Ramanathapuram,TN
#ArudraDarisanam
Unique Natarajar made of emerlad is abt 6 feet tall.
It is always covered with sandal paste.Only on Thriuvadhirai Star in month Margazhi-Nataraja can be worshipped without sandal paste.


After removing the sandal paste,day long rituals & various abhishekam will be
https://t.co/e1Ye8DrNWb day Maragatha Nataraja sannandhi will be closed after anointing the murthi with fresh sandal paste.Maragatha Natarajar is covered with sandal paste throughout the year


as Emerald has scientific property of its molecules getting disturbed when exposed to light/water/sound.This is an ancient Shiva temple considered to be 3000 years old -believed to be where Bhagwan Shiva gave Veda gyaana to Parvati Devi.This temple has some stunning sculptures.

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