The EXACT script that got a positive response from a $1B+ company - Blue Origin
(Bezos’ Space Travel company 🚀)
In just ONE week of outreach
[THREAD]
Every outreach message needs to get 5 things right:
1. Crisp, relevant to their role, personalized
2. Relevance + calling out a PAIN POINT
3. How other people EXACTLY like them are solving the SAME pain point
4. How THEY will benefit
5. Question CTA to gauge interest
AND
You need to Fit all of this in less than 100 words
This was the email we sent
Let’s break it down
1. Opening
How to write a good opening?
Make it relevant and a genuine compliment. Can go the Personalized lines route that @blackhatwizardd taught in CEM
Or, you can simply find bits of information that would apply to batches of your prospects.
this is what we did